I thought you would make her more child looking, but she's still very cute with more mature/teen features, I really like your version and I simply love how you made her eyes! with a few brushstrokes you made them look so real
She is pretty. I find it changes from the character looking like a little girl I remembered in the manga (it's sooo far away ). I like the background with the stars and I also like the colours. You maked her eyes very bright, it catch attention.